Pitch paragraph - Death at the Happiness Club

A pitch paragraph for you to consider. Please comment!



DEATH AT THE HAPPINESS
CLUB by Cecilia Peartree – a mystery novel

Cecilia points out that this is the actual blurb from her
Amazon entry and realizes that it’s therefore not necessarily exactly like a
pitch paragraph.

Cecilia’s pitch:



“Death at the Happiness Club is the 4th in a series of quirky mysteries
set in a small town in